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Two months ago, there was an incident that happened in Anawai alley. A man made a trouble. His name was Garuda.
Anawai alley was quiet at that night. Only some people who strolled on the way.  In  the calm night at 9 p.m, suddenly, a loud scream was heard. Everyone could recognize that voice. Someone who always scream if he get angry. Certainly, he was Garuda.  
Garuda screamed continually and made people came out from home. Short in time, Anawai became crowded with people who wanted to check what was happening.  Garuda raged like a crazy person. He did not care to people around. He threw Gunadharma dormitory by stone. He also broke window and plate in that dorm. After messing up things, he started to enter each room in Gunadharma. No one was brave enough stopped Garuda. They were afraid because Garuda brought a knife. He could attack everyone around him. Everybody knew Garuda was a bad guy and he was a drunker. So, they did not want towards the danger.
After checking each room, he came out. Nobody knew what actually he was looking for. About five minute later, he screamed again. He called Aco continually until Aco appeared. Aco tried to talk with him, but he chased Aco with his knife. He chased like a tiger chased his prey. A man said that Garuda had a grudge to Aco. That was why he chased Aco. After cathcing  Aco, Garuda hit him. He almost killed Aco, but he was  prevented by people around.  After that,   Police came and caught Garuda.
It was very dangerous incident that I have ever seen. I hope it will not happen anymore.




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                                    CHILDREN’S PLAYING ONLINE GAME HABIT SHOULD BE RESTRICTED
Nowadays , along with the development of technology, online game like mushroom after rain. Online game is enjoyable for people especially children. Children are very easy for being addicted by online game. It is bad, and should be restricted.
Firstly, playing online game can make children waste their time. When child become too adicted with  online game, he just stuck in front of his laptop or gadget. He usually forget about another work that he have to finish. Sometimes, child do not do his schools assigment, even there is also child who do not eat because of too busy with his game.
Secondly, child has a little ability to socialize with his friends in the same age. It happens when child spends too much time in playing game, and they do not have much time for having fun and communicating with their friends in real life.
Thirdly, from the health side, playing game can give negative effect for child’s body. Facing computer’s monitor too often can damage children eyes. It is because monitor will give a strong light  it make children’s eyes become hurt. As a result, many children got hazy when seeing something and they have to use glasses. Besides, the backbone also can be damaged because child sits for long time in the same position.
Fourthly, there are some dangerous scene that can be immitated by child like fighting game. There is a  deathly case of child because he immitate naruto action in the game. It is very dangerous.
From all these arguments, we can find out that playing online game too much for children will give a lot of bad effects. To overcome this, parents should pay their attention to their children and restrict game-playing time of children. For children, it’s good if they spend more of their time for making a socialitation rather than spending too much fun for online games.

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